Tuesday, April 14, 2015

HaIku

The sky and the ground
Equal in sound and calmness
dances around me

The little black puck
Gracefully glides around
Over icy blood

Max is a fat tool
Nate does not have very many friends
Was that enough

3 comments:

  1. I like how you had two serious Haikus and then a humorous one, it helped break up the more serious tone.

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  2. like Rachel, the first two were serious and the last one added a funny end to it.

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  3. Your second one is my favorite one. A surprising ending.

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